Under the Lowest
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Under the Lowest
by Merci Thu Jan 23, 2014 11:57 am
We don't care about who you are
where you've been and things you've done
not your millions of dollars or damned guitar
or whether or not you're on the run.
We don't care about who your dad is
or that you can run a mile in 4 flat
not about those shots you didn't miss
or your seven-hundred dollar hats.
Down here, you're on our level
and there'll be no changing that,
here where God is eye-to-eye with the Devil
and stares like a dumb-stricken cat.
So drop the attitude and lose the anger
there's no time for it down here
take your place and cause no clangor
and maybe you'll get the all-clear.
where you've been and things you've done
not your millions of dollars or damned guitar
or whether or not you're on the run.
We don't care about who your dad is
or that you can run a mile in 4 flat
not about those shots you didn't miss
or your seven-hundred dollar hats.
Down here, you're on our level
and there'll be no changing that,
here where God is eye-to-eye with the Devil
and stares like a dumb-stricken cat.
So drop the attitude and lose the anger
there's no time for it down here
take your place and cause no clangor
and maybe you'll get the all-clear.
Merci
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Re: Under the Lowest
by Indian Overlord Thu Jan 23, 2014 5:46 pm
I liked it, although the style comes off much more differently than how your poems usually are. Much more blunt and straightforward, kind of a nice change in pace.
Indian Overlord
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